Girl on a string

WALT:show not tell and to use a variety of punctuation

The smell of just walking outside on a cold winter day. I was hanging  from a string, just floating in mid air and there was something above me. It was a red and orange color. I was high. I could see green mountains. there were fluffy clouds looking like candy floss above me. was I going to fall. I don’t know .

finally I could see something. it was a greyish color. I knew I was heading home I landed.