Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallows bare bone


WALT : create a bare bones plan
  1. boy at a campfire cooking marshmallows
  2. something creeps behind him
  3. there is a big shadow
  4. he turns around
  5. monster sits next to him
  6. monster cries because he is hungry
  7. boy gives him a marsh mallow
  8. they are both happy
  9. sing camp songs
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  1. Unknown27 August 2014 at 10:37

    Hello Lillie
    I like you images. I like how you put no detail into your writing you are really getting the hang of this! It must of been scary for the little boy.
    Bye Bye Lillie
    PS: Have a nice day!

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