Tuesday 3 November 2015

Random Tuesday writing

The dark long thin leaves hanging from each other making a crowd of leaves like a stadium of people curios of what is going to happen in the next round of rugby. The lights dangling makes it look like a comfy relaxing place to wonder around. Brown crunchy leaves on the stained wooden ground making it hard to lay one foot on the ground to get to the bath hidden in the corner of a mysteries place. A wooden old cupboard standing on the ground just siting there waiting for someone to open him. Two small wax candles in the cupboard gazing up at who ever dares to enter. The bath water runs down from the rusted brown taps making a explosion of water in the very small bath.
Who doesn't dream of bathing outdoors? But it's also nice to have a nook for privacy.:

4 comments:

  1. Hi Lillie that is so good I love the description It sound like it would be a great piece of writing to put in your next writing.

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  2. Hi Lillie
    I like your writing and I like the first Sentence. What is your favorite thing about your writing and why? Do you think you could have changed anything?

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  3. Hello Lllie I like all of your descriptive words and the crowd part thart was interesting i would say maybe some more talking about the furniture inside
    what do you like about the photo?
    Bye-bye Jessie

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  4. Hi lillie i like how u started with the long dark leaves hanging from each other do u think some one comes here like its a hide out

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