Monday, 30 June 2014
Lone robot
walt show not tell
There was a rusty machine that was exploring the nature standing on the crinkly stuff from Autumn trees so unhappy the crinkly stuff surrounding him with a frown on his face it looked terrible.
Girl on a string
WALT:show not tell and to use a variety of punctuation
The smell of just walking outside on a cold winter day. I was hanging from a string, just floating in mid air and there was something above me. It was a red and orange color. I was high. I could see green mountains. there were fluffy clouds looking like candy floss above me. was I going to fall. I don’t know .
finally I could see something. it was a greyish color. I knew I was heading home I landed.
Hanging bed description
Hanging bed description
Walt: is to show not tell
walt is to use punctuation
As I woke from a dream - I came alive. I could smell the outdoors, it made me sleepy. and I just about lay down again. I saw something wooden with some nice patterned stuff. There was a bright yellow thing shining in front of my eyes. I could just fall asleep again and I did.
Tuesday, 24 June 2014
Take the cake award for someone in syndicate 3
I chose Miss panther because when our classroom needs help with our maths or writing or topic she is always there s time even if it is time for lunch. Miss Panther still risks her lunch to help us and we get better at work it will be nice if Miss Panther gets take the cake.
Choir
Last Friday I wen't to the regent theater in town and we sung in front of heaps of people.
I lost my voice after that night and it was so much harder to sing if I wanted to do something
I lost my voice after that night and it was so much harder to sing if I wanted to do something
Monday, 23 June 2014
Hanging Bed Description
As I woke from a dream - I came alive. I could smell the outdoors, it made me sleepy. and I just about lay down again. I saw something wooden with some nice patterned stuff. There was a bright yellow thing shining in front of my eyes. I could just fall asleep again and I did.
Friday, 20 June 2014
KKN quiz
today I did the KKN quiz and I got 4 write it was fun and hard but I enjoyed it!
click here to do the quiz
click here to do the quiz
KKN
Magic out of ANZ Championship
The firebirds were to strong for the magic leading throughout the game.
The Queenslanders will take on the Melbourne team on Sunday for the title.
the magic did pull things back in the third quarter the firebirds proved to the strong in the last quarter .
Friday, 13 June 2014
KKN
Today Friday the 13th we did a kiwi kids news quiz it was fun and a bit hard I got to work with my friends.
Wednesday, 4 June 2014
My little sister
I have a little sister called Emme she is tiny and she is a baby I have 2 annoying brothers
so now I am lucky to have a little sister.
so now I am lucky to have a little sister.
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