Twelve doors

I opened the first door and I saw a crocodile and he had a smelly breath and a water pistol.

The second door had chomping dinosaurs with lasers coming out of his claws.

In the third door there was dragons raging up and throwing out fire from their mouth.

In the next door I could see an evil fairy with a smelly rubbish bin and was about to throw at me.

In the fifth door there was a giant that liked to eat little girls for breakfast lunch and dinner sometimes desert .

In the 6th door i saw a weird clown with a chainsword and a gun.

In the next door i saw a half lion and half eagle hunting for meat and little girls aaahhhhh.

In the 8th door a crowed full of really bad bugs and bad animals.

In the next door there was awful teacher .

In the 10th door there was man eating sharks looking for people.

In the 11th door there was T - rexes tearing up flesh from people.

In the last door I thought it was going to be bad but it was a whole world of lollies.

Lone robot

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There was a rusty machine that was exploring the nature standing on the crinkly stuff from Autumn trees so unhappy the crinkly stuff surrounding him with a frown on his face it looked terrible.

Girl on a string

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The smell of just walking outside on a cold winter day. I was hanging  from a string, just floating in mid air and there was something above me. It was a red and orange color. I was high. I could see green mountains. there were fluffy clouds looking like candy floss above me. was I going to fall. I don’t know .

finally I could see something. it was a greyish color. I knew I was heading home I landed.

Hanging bed description

Hanging bed description  

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As I woke from a dream - I came alive. I could smell the outdoors, it made me sleepy. and I just about lay down again. I saw something wooden with some nice patterned stuff. There was a bright yellow thing shining in front of my eyes. I could just fall asleep again and I did.

Bumble bee writting

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